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JOSIE'S POEMS

Winter Poems

By Josie Whitehead

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Poem to Perform

Tree Branch in the Snow
Berries

S  N  O  W
By Josie Whitehead

Snow

Snow’s carried on the breath of wind
     Beneath the murky cloud.
It coats the countryside and towns
     Within its fleecy shroud.

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Then whirling, twirling, spinning fast
     And dancing on the breeze,
It gently lands on village streets,
    On lawns and leafless trees.

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It covers both the twigs and bough,
    The hedgerows and the farm,
And paints a stunning. silvery scene - 
      A touch of wintry charm.

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Its fluffy coat, bright in the sun,
   Adorns the tops of trees
And the world of nature’s captured
     In a sculptured, frosty frieze.

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Then, as the sun begins to sink
     Down in the western sky,
The chilly breeze begins to stir
     And quietly breathes a sigh.

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The *spectral moon comes into view,
     Yet from a nearby tree
A robin, with its breast of fire,
    Sings one last song for me.

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The brightest planet, Venus, shines
     Upon a world that’s still.
We shut our doors, brush off the snow
     And escape the winter’s chill.

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* Spectral moon:  This adjective relates to the ghostly aspect of the moon - ie when I see it with a ghost-like misty cloak surrounding it in the cold, snowy sky.

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When you're writing a descriptive essay or poem, bring in all the elements that you can see, feel, hear etc to bring your picture to life.  Count up the numbers of adjectives that I have used to paint this winter picture.  See also the personification and metaphors that I've used also.  Look how metre is important in a poem too, to bring in movement. 

                            

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